As you may know, I’m fascinated by the traditional haiku – those short Japanese poems consisting of three pithy lines; and the lines containing firstly five syllables, then seven, then five.
Below are a number of verses to a poem, with each verse being a haiku, and each (hopefully) seen as progressive, and saying something (albeit brief, and poetic) about our awesome, complex, mysterious ‘composition’ as humankind.
Flesh and blood yet flow
within our soul’s great embrace.
Animated dust?‘Yet more!’, the sage says.
The soul, the immortal light,
is the precious ‘you’.Where the soul resides,
time and timelessness exist
in a paradox.There, le point vierge,
a meeting place of the soul,
Wondrous rendezvous.The ‘go-between’ soul
encounters, there, the spirit,
always faced to God.
In liminal space,
there we dance the dance of Love.
Graceful theosis.Triune personhood,
as above, e’en so below.
You, mirrored Spirit.
I loved your poem! Great use of the haiku form to weave the mysteries of the universe.
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Thankyou so much for your encouraging words, and I’m pleased you liked the haiku. I very much appreciate you taking the time to stop and read it. Many blessings to you and yours, Tadhg
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